Katie Hopkins, or better known as 'the biggest bitch in Britain' has finally reached her timely demise. She managed to survive from the 13th of February 1975 till the 13th of February's 2015, aged 40- even in death her wishes to be 'perfect' were seemingly achieved with her her first and last breath being taken in symmetry.
Did her unwanted opinions tip her over the boiling point in society? It seems that former apprentice star got too big for her boots. Isn't it awkward that she thought just because she was a celebrity, she was safe from the hatred of others pointing the guns to her head?
From her rejection of 'fat people', judging of children's names based on her views of social class to her appreciation for worldly horrific diseases like 'ebola', this contradictory celeb created a worldwide 'hate base'. It seems that even the ones she thought loved her(AKA her husband Mark Cross, and her children) didn't even shed a genuine tear at her funeral. Police had to drag people away from trampling on her grave, whilst many sang the hit song 'celebration by Kool and the gang' metres away from the ceremony taking place.
Great use of contrasting tones for the two pieces and both are effective. Watch out for caps for Proper nouns e.g. The Apprentice, and for little grammar slips e.g. you must separate multiple adjectives that modify a veb with commas e.g. long, straight hair not ling straight hair (I can't see your other text from here to quote the right phrase - see if you can spot it). Commentary needs to contrast the two texts in terms of techniques suitable for the different GRAPEs.
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