Saturday, 5 March 2016

Blog entry and commentary

Blog entry
@sugarandspiceandallthingsfluff
Hey there again my furry friend lovers!
Yeah it’s me, I’m back! Lovely to be able to talk to you lovely people again. How’ve you all been? How’s your furry little friends doing? If any of you remember, a little while back I mentioned that my town might be getting their very own cat café! How amazing is that right? I know, some people are on edge about this idea, saying that it will be cruel and unfair to the cats, but I have a new update I thought you would all like! The people organising this cat café told us that the cats will be coming from an animal shelter and that they will be helping them to become fostered as well as being able to get the attention and cuddles from the customers throughout the process. Isn’t that lovely? They are trying to raise money in order to get this shop off of the ground and are looking for donators, they are giving out prizes to those who support them which I think is absolutely adorable. It really shows that they appreciate the help they’re getting! They’ve already reached £12,000, but are hoping to reach £25,000 in order to open successfully. If all goes to plan they say that they’re hoping the shop will be ready by summer time, and they are looking for volunteers and staff to join them soon. Click the link at the end of this entry to see what I’ve been raving about!
If you have any opinions you’d like to share with me, please do so in the comments below!

COMMENTS:
@Catlover65-wow this completely blows my mind. I’m so happy! Do you know where the cats are coming from? What shelter?
@sugarandspiceandallthingsfluff- they’re getting the little kitties from sunshine inn rescue shelter! So glad that you’re as happy as meJ

COMMENTARY:
I have used a username to show that I know what genre I am writing in, and have based my writing with the lexical field on animals to have a set theme to relate to my readers. As you can see I call my followers ‘furry friend lovers’ to show my calm and laid back attitude, making the readers more comfortable with me. By saying ‘I’m back’ it shows that I am aware of my large following audience, which portrays that my blog is quite popular(as you can see by the comment section). I have used facts and figures to show that I am knowledgeable and know what im talking about, which makes the reader feel more secure in what I am saying. I talk as if I am talking to a friend to engage my followers, making them want to interact with me and share their opinions to. I have used interrogatives to show that I am interested in what they have to say which shows that my personality is shining through my writing. I express my opinions to show that I am passionate about what I am talking about and I use the adjective ‘lovely’ to show that my feelings are positive.
I have created a comment section which also shows that I know the style I am writing in and I have used positive commenters as well as negative to show the diverse society we live in. I have also written a link to show that I am aware the blog is internet based.

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